Talk:Japanese Cormorant

Appearance Article

To the editor Migrubbs who I believe requested feedback on their edit of Japanese Cormorant's appearance article here via my (talk) page: I think your writing has improved and I like your language here. I however, would suggest describing Cormorant's old and new designs separately, because it gets a little confusing to be switching back and forth between different details on the different designs. Also, I would like to suggest trying to preserve as much of Claytn's original description of the old design as possible, since it is a good description, it could just use a little expansion maybe. --RainbowafterSnow (talk) 02:33, 24 September 2020 (UTC)